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Rose, your fair highlighted hair glows in the sea air as she blows.
Suddenly I don't care, if she knows
Feelings I've kept so hush.
Watching the setting sun slumber and sleep silent into the sea
And thoughts play, in my mind I wonder of the way
Time mocked you and me..
If my love were not untold
Some years ago, when I was not this old
Then my hand, would be there still to hold
Suddenly I don't care, if she knows
Feelings I've kept so hush.
Watching the setting sun slumber and sleep silent into the sea
And thoughts play, in my mind I wonder of the way
Time mocked you and me..
If my love were not untold
Some years ago, when I was not this old
Then my hand, would be there still to hold
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This is old. I'm not sure what I think of it, there's loads wrong with it but I wasn't really trying to ahieve anything and I like the structure of narrative. Also, it's fictional, about no-one in particular, so suck my toe.
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Wow, some of these lines are perfect. Others seem to be put there for lack of knowing what else to do, I agree with *completeaccident* and most things in her comment, its damn nice though.